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Toontown's Evil Twins
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Last part!
[IMG]http://img70.**************/img70/4315/scene601cq.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://img70.**************/img70/6673/scene611bk.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://img233.**************/img233/2889/scene627dg.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://img70.**************/img70/3574/scene637si.jpg[/IMG] I was..... Jasmine, Queen Raven and Danielle Anna090 was Danny |
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Editing 3/10
Sorry. You could do a much better job Story 5/10 I'm just saying what I think. First, who was the bad guy? Second, Why would the bad guy say where he was? Third, Why would your cousin give you powers? She could've gave them to you anytime. And fourth, that room has already been used in other SS Stories. And that Toon HQ guy saying stuff like that, is from The DIP. That's just what I think... Oh yeah, wouldn't you want your main charater to be drinking the healthy soda? Sorry if I sound really negative, I know you all think that. {Sniff]Edit: Wait, she did take the heathy soda! NVM! |
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i have to agree with timmy on dip is getting boring because of 2 things
1.it takes you forever to post 2.its same old concept dip attacks,dip gets destroyed,dip returns,etc etc and heres what i would rate this rating is for timmy's story 9.5/10 for ur story 9.0/10 on ur editing because you do have to admit its kinda sloppy Last edited by lobo2395; 04-28-2006 at 10:05 PM. |
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I think the DIP and TTR's stories are awesome.
Yes, the editing is sort of sloppy and could be better, but it's still making very good sense! And for the DIP - she takes forever to post because she works really hard on it! Both the stories are great in my opinion. |
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