The Orb: A screenshot story

I have one thing to say to anyone with a powerup like this: Don't keep it!
Chapter One: The VP's nemesis
The Orb of power was found in a volcano by a cat named Big Lollipop Fumblesocks. He discovered it had the power to protect him and other toons! He then, feeling confident, went to the VP's office. And the battle begun.

The orb also was able to tell the future. Big Lollipop Fumblesocks knew excatly what to use, and when to jump. Then, he found a use for the strange rocks inside.

He, feeling confident, destroyed the cogs. Then a foolish toon came up to him and asked to see it.
"You can't have it!" shouted Big Lollipop Fumblesocks.

To be continued in the next chapter...

How was that? Good?

[Shadow Knuckles]

Umm did you copy me whith whole sceernshot story thingo.O

No, I use my own Ideas only.

[Shadow Knuckles]

OK^_^

So I make tips you make fanfics?Ok thats good

In the skelecog battle, the orb was glowing red. The toons were missing even though the orb said they would hit. The Skelecogs hit every time. The toons went sad.

Big Lollipop Fumblesocks was angry at the orb. He went to the maze and tried to get a flower from it, but couldn't.

It was then that the orb began to glow blue.

The orb was emitting an aura of sound of warning.

Then, the orb was glowing red now.

The cat started to turn red with anger.

Then, Big Lollipop Fumblesocks realized he was being taken over.

To be continued...

Was that good, too?

[Shadow Knuckles]

I like it.Heres some tips

Try makeing Orb alive like evil.

The orb took over Big Lollipop Fumblesocks' mind, despite his atempt at resistance.

The orb took him to TTC's HQ office. He then asked the HQ officer to see Flippy.

The officer was dumb. He let the orb see Flippy.
"Hi, Big Lollipop Fumblesocks! Why are your eyes red?" said Flippy.

To be continued...

That was good, eh?

I posted that before I saw your post, shadow knucles. It takes a long time.

[Paul the Ham]

This is a really cool original idea, make more!

Sorry, I can't do anymore tonight. This computer can't support TT, and therefor, I can't make screenshots. I'll do more tomarrow. It's late in the eastern time zone, which I am in. Read you tomarrow!

[Tracy Snifflefudd]

More More More!

Chapter Four: Superhero hearing
Meanwhile, at some estate, the superhero MegaMonkey was suddenly alerted.
"Flippy's in danger!" said MegaMonkey.
He then went out side to TP to the PG.

He needed somone to guard the hideout, so he told Ace, his sidekick, to watch it while he was gone.

Here he goes.


When he got there, he realized the attacker of Flippy was the Flaming Feline, one of the superheroes in JASO!

To be continued in the next chapter.

What did you like most about it?

[David87877]

May i help with story like there was two orbs but the 1st one was piked up by my toon?

Sorry, but I already have an Idea of how this will turn out.

[David87877]

Like a part to "the other orb!" PLease can i post here though PLEASE????