my sss part 1 (lost friend)

[david6152]

ok so i made a sss about a friend kidnapped by the cogs this is part 1 (part 2 is coming soon)
here is the link....
http://s158.****************/albums/t...t=eaee3715.pbr
rate it if you want

[Delma Harrence]

9/10
movie good
but your using the same effect over and over

[CocoaKrispy]

thats cute...but yea like the post before me...change the effect between slides. otherwise good story i cant wait for what comes next!


P to the P
(papa purr)

[david6152]

oooh sorry about that it doesnt let me go back and edit it lol well il do it in part 2.

[Super Monkey 911]

wow this is good,9/10 just please dont try to make it exactly like my SSS story thanks :-)