Design a new fish species!!!

[Prof. Pickles McPretzel]

Augest 14th. 4 days left to post entries everybody.

[Loopy Scooter Gigglewig]

Bumpity Bump Bump

[Prof. Pickles McPretzel]

Originally Posted by Prof. Pickles McPretzel

Augest 14th. 4 days left to post entries everybody.

As you can see 2 days.
If no one gives there submition then everyone will make the cut even though 1 entry has somthing I included you had to have.

[Piccolo Mondo]

saving the bump 4 ya BUMP

[Prof. Pickles McPretzel]

Bump!
Round 1 is over!
If you did round 1 then you passed! Round 2: Tell a story of how your fish swam into toontown.
Please have it at least 50 words+.
Rating or 1/10 is judged on: %50 detail %20 funnyness and %30 story like.

[colonel spotty]

Originally Posted by Prof. Pickles McPretzel

Bump!
Round 1 is over!
If you did round 1 then you passed! Round 2: Tell a story of how your fish swam into toontown.
Please have it at least 50 words+.
Rating or 1/10 is judged on: %50 detail %20 funnyness and %30 story like.

oooo so if they all post a story only 1 will lose since there are 4 left

[Prof. Pickles McPretzel]

Originally Posted by colonel spotty

oooo so if they all post a story only 1 will lose since there are 4 left

No, 2 people will be out after this round.
Judges will have a big role now (last round none had to!)
And this is the semi finals! So the 2 that get through this round will be in the finals!

[Loopy Scooter Gigglewig]

When's the deadline for this?

[Squiddy22]

Originally Posted by Prof. Pickles McPretzel

Bump!
Round 1 is over!
If you did round 1 then you passed! Round 2: Tell a story of how your fish swam into toontown.
Please have it at least 50 words+.
Rating or 1/10 is judged on: %50 detail %20 funnyness and %30 story like.

Okay.

One day, on the Great Toonier Reef, a little fish was swimming along the ocean current, when all of the sudden, he spotted a Merry-Go-Round. He had never seen one before, so he was very curious to what it was, and what it did. He saw it going around and around, so he started doing the same thing, swimming and swimming around in a circle. He did this for one hour, until he started to get dizzy. He couldn't stop swimming in a circle, and he was getting so sick, his skin started to change colors. The little fish was so dizzy, he spun himself all the way into Toontown.

[Prof. Pickles McPretzel]

Originally Posted by Loopy Scooter Gigglewig

When's the deadline for this?

Originally Posted by Squiddy22

*His story can't type it out o_O but it's amazing!*

Ummm the 20th.
And bumpy. Squiddy22 I gotta tell you your a perfect score from me right now. If Colonel Spotty gives a 9 or 10 your in the final round .

[colonel spotty]

thats a if ill be thinking about it and i like ur story but i didnt see much funny but its good so ill be thinking.

[Loopy Scooter Gigglewig]

“We’re going to go to the pet shop and get you some new toys, okay, Polly?” Shawn said to his pet parrot, perched in her cage.
“New toys! SQUAK!” Polly replied, obviously excited.
Shawn opened the cage and Polly flew onto his shoulder. Shawn got into his car and started it up. Then they drove together to the pet shop.
“SQUAK! Hurry up!” yelled the anxious parrot.
“I can’t go any faster or I’ll be over the speed limit, Polly!”
Polly became so impatient that she started screaming like crazy and flying all over the car. Shawn’s car began swerving all over the road, sending Polly flying out the window!
The next thing she knew, Polly was careening through the air off a cliff. Too stunned to flap her wings, she fell into a garbage truck.
“SQUAK! Safe now.”
But Polly spoke too soon. The garbage truck began emptying its contents into the ocean. Besides the fact that this was polluting the environment, it meant Polly was going to drown!
Polly opened her eyes. She was in a hospital. A gray creature was standing above her.
“Hello,” it spoke. “I’m Dr. White, one of the nurse sharks here at the Fish Hospital of Toontown. The doctor sharks here fixed you up, so now you can lead a happy life in the sea.”
Polly saw she had fins and gills.
“SQUAK! Polly fish?”
“Yes, we can do some amazing things here at the Fish Hospital.” said Dr. White. “Have a good day, and enjoy your life as a fish!
And so the Parrotfish became one of many vibrant fish in the seas of Toontown.

[Prof. Pickles McPretzel]

Originally Posted by Loopy Scooter Gigglewig

“We’re going to go to the pet shop and get you some new toys, okay, Polly?” Shawn said to his pet parrot, perched in her cage.
“New toys! SQUAK!” Polly replied, obviously excited.
Shawn opened the cage and Polly flew onto his shoulder. Shawn got into his car and started it up. Then they drove together to the pet shop.
“SQUAK! Hurry up!” yelled the anxious parrot.
“I can’t go any faster or I’ll be over the speed limit, Polly!”
Polly became so impatient that she started screaming like crazy and flying all over the car. Shawn’s car began swerving all over the road, sending Polly flying out the window!
The next thing she knew, Polly was careening through the air off a cliff. Too stunned to flap her wings, she fell into a garbage truck.
“SQUAK! Safe now.”
But Polly spoke too soon. The garbage truck began emptying its contents into the ocean. Besides the fact that this was polluting the environment, it meant Polly was going to drown!
Polly opened her eyes. She was in a hospital. A gray creature was standing above her.
“Hello,” it spoke. “I’m Dr. White, one of the nurse sharks here at the Fish Hospital of Toontown. The doctor sharks here fixed you up, so now you can lead a happy life in the sea.”
Polly saw she had fins and gills.
“SQUAK! Polly fish?”
“Yes, we can do some amazing things here at the Fish Hospital.” said Dr. White. “Have a good day, and enjoy your life as a fish!
And so the Parrotfish became one of many vibrant fish in the seas of Toontown.

It's very story like and it's very detailed and funnyness, I like the bird's SQUAK a lot. But that's all I thought funny.
Rating:9

[Prof. Pickles McPretzel]

Originally Posted by Squiddy22

Okay.

One day, on the Great Toonier Reef, a little fish was swimming along the ocean current, when all of the sudden, he spotted a Merry-Go-Round. He had never seen one before, so he was very curious to what it was, and what it did. He saw it going around and around, so he started doing the same thing, swimming and swimming around in a circle. He did this for one hour, until he started to get dizzy. He couldn't stop swimming in a circle, and he was getting so sick, his skin started to change colors. The little fish was so dizzy, he spun himself all the way into Toontown.

(Sorry for double post I'm the host giving my rating.)
Very detailed some funny parts and story like all the way.
Rating:9.5

[Prof. Pickles McPretzel]

Sorry for the 6 day delay.
Well you 2 have made the finals!!!
Please post your final entry the deadline is september 5th (my 1st day of school...) so round 3...
Post a ad for your little fishy.
And remember, everyone's a winner.