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The Fight Of Toontown
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07-30-2006, 02:30 AM
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The Fight Of Toontown
A toon called Steven a royal blue cat was just sitting on the side of a street next to a garbage can when he coughed up a corpse of a fish oh so thats where it was! When he saw the cog that rules all of them go down the street to donalds dock so he decicded to follow and found something that would change his toony life forever.
__________________________________________________ _____________ i will write the first chapter -LGGN- Last edited by Trillen; 07-30-2006 at 03:20 AM. |
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07-30-2006, 02:43 AM
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When he went into the tunnel and he saw the most grey place in toontown! a level 12 Big Wig,Mr Hollywood,The Big Cheese,and Robber Baron went into the gag shop and left with handfull's of gag's and when they left it turned grey. And all the toons lost their laff. So steven ran fast out of donalds dock to toontown central and told flippy and showed him screenshots. flippy jumped up in shock and got Mickey,Minnie,Donald,and Goofy and gave Steven a 300 laff boost so he was 315 so he brang him there.Flippy at 1000 lead them in Mickey and Minnie went for the gag shop. Goofy and Donald went for the trolly and then the pet shop. then Steven and Flippy went underwater to find a street. They went in and and got prepared. what they saw shocked them for as long as their toony lifes are.
got no replys? -LGGN- Last edited by Trillen; 07-30-2006 at 03:20 AM. |
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07-30-2006, 02:59 AM
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It's interesting...
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07-30-2006, 03:06 AM
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Flippy and Steven went in and it was huge with level 1-12 cogs walking around and the boss cogs were there .Flippy said this is going to be more trouble then i thought. Flippy went and destroyed 17 cogs for the 17 parts and defeated 17 more for Steven but this time they got cog voice boxses and cog heads so the boss wouldn't know. But the VP CJ and CFO were coming down the ramp to the cog boss and so Flippy and Steven just stood there. The VP looked at them and whispered something to the CFO and CJ and the CJ yelled hey you guys have to move! so Flippy and Steven moved but a bit faster then cogs the VP mumbled and went away with the CJ and the CFO. So they went up to the lobby and got in the elevator it opend up and the CJ VP and CFO were just there and went back up through the elevator. welcome! come here! Flippy and Steven went up to him and he said the VP CJ and the CFO told me about you two so lets just fight now. the boss let out all level 12's and all The Big Cheese's Mr Hollywood's Robber Baron's and Big Wig's
will Flippy and Steven make it out? Find out next chapter -LGGN- Last edited by Trillen; 07-30-2006 at 03:26 AM. |
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07-30-2006, 03:09 AM
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It's a bit confusing. I like the story, though.
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07-30-2006, 03:14 AM
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I think it might attract a bit more people if there were propor quotation marks and capitalizations.
Last edited by Thunder&Bolt; 07-30-2006 at 03:53 AM. |
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07-30-2006, 03:16 AM
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I'm only here to help...And read your story of course.
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07-30-2006, 03:29 AM
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I love the story! anymore chapters i hate left getting hanging
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07-30-2006, 03:42 AM
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It's an improvment, but still there are a few...Uh...Typos.
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07-30-2006, 03:45 AM
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Wow Nice Story Dude
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07-30-2006, 04:07 AM
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They Managed To make it out but they were both at 125 they used birthday cakes to hit the boss but the boss hit both with his huge tieit was minus 25 Flippy looked around and saw steps going up so flippy grabbed the CJ's mallet that he left and got to the top he got on the bang part of it and jumped off with it it hit the boss in the head and the boss was at red he threw cogs at them one hit flippy and he want sad but steven dodge his and threw a birthday cake directly in his cage then drop a anvil on his head then threw another birthday cake but the boss got a away through the elevator but steven danced and then went to donalds dock to see flipy and flippy gave him a max toonup phrase and used it and they went to the gag shop building to take it back over minnie,mickey,flippy,and steven went to the trolly to help goofy and donald there were already in a cog game and the cog moved extremely fast for the match cog game goofy lost but donald won so it gto tooken back over so they went to the pet shop and they battled vp'sfor each of them was a vp flippy,micky,minnie,donald,and goofuy made it but steven went sad so they took care of the last one and the pet shop opened up again flippy gave steven 1 1000 laffboost so he was 1315 laff so they went to the center where a 100 story building was.
can they take over the building or will they go sad? -LGGN- |
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07-30-2006, 04:11 AM
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Pretty good chapter.
Off Topic: 100th post! I'm gonna go to bed now, bye everyone. Last edited by Tepcat; 01-23-2007 at 03:37 AM. Reason: multiple posts by same user |
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07-30-2006, 04:15 AM
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Pretty god buts wats with these 1000 laff boosts
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