The Story of the baby Eons

[SonickLeafeon]

Ohes noes! Some of the baby eons were eon-napped!
What do the houndooms want the runts for? Will they be okay?

Umbreon's been through so much so fast, it's a wonder she doesn't faint from exhaustion.
Not to worry! The Eons are on the case!

(and I kinda agree about the shiny eons... I never really intended to have the clan go past the original 8 eons, but there are some pwnsome people in the baby eons. Not so much with the shiny and baby shinies..... they're like an entirely different and unrelated group.)

[KiwiBasket]

Awesomeee~ 2 fer 1! ;D
Geez... The Houndooms sure are the Eon's enemies. They captured them! GASP.

Wait... I thought Eevee was a boy. xD
From Chapter 5, I couldn't really tell which were the regular Eons and the baby Eons.
(or were they all regular eons except Baby Umbreon?)

I'm guessing Napoleon is a Houndoom~
...Napoleon... Somehow it's fun to say it. xD

Can't wait for more. :3

[SonicKirby64]

Pretty much all the Eons from chapters 4-5 were the Baby Eons, I just got lazy with the words. At the end when Leafeon is speaking, those are the regular Eons. I should fix that later. x3

[faceofthefox1442]

Originally Posted by SonicKirby64

Will the missing Eons be found? Will the houndooms come and attack again? Will Mespirit’s true intentions be uncovered? And will Vaporeon ever get a ham sandwich? Stay tuned! And thanks for the comments! xD

ROFL. Will Vaporeon ever get a ham sandwich? Dun dun dun...

[Baby Peach]

Epic chapters SK!

[SonicKirby64]

*Pokes thread* Is my story too off for you? xD. Well, I wrote 3 new chapters, and it just gets weirder. Now I'm probably gonna be off with the chapters from now on, but I'll try to get some in when I can. I'll still try to bump this thread. So, without further ado:

Chapter 6:

I wake up to hear the older Eons heading out. I must have slept in. Wait… did I see Mespirit again? I tried to remember anything, anything at all I may have seen, but it was no use. She hasn’t visited me again. Oh, right. I wanted to tell the other Eons about Mespirit. I’ll have to wait until later to tell the older ones though. I hope my sister… Umbreon… will be alright. I tried to shake the thought out of my head. There’s no way they could capture her… or would capture her… I know it, I told myself. Still a bit drowsy, I walked out to see my clan chatting about the latest news. Having missed the departing, I asked around.
“What happened?” was the first question that I managed to say.
“Well, the grown-up Eons headed out to go get our friends,” Baby Eevee said.
“Yeah, and they said they would chase off those houndooms!” added Baby Vaporeon.
“I wished I could have come. I’m more than ready,” Baby Glaceon hastily said.
“I also told those two about your dream,” purred Espy.
“Oh yeah! The dream!” yelled Baby Vaporeon. “I never knew Mespirit was so bad!”
“Shh!” I whispered. “We don’t know that for sure. All we know is that I had a dream, but it is not certain from where the dream came.”
“Yeah,” said Baby Glaceon. “You may not be Miss Special after all.”
“Do you want me to make you confined to this spot all day?” Espy hissed.
“Oh sorry,” Baby Glaceon snickered.
Throughout the rest of the morning, things ran pretty normal. We played some games, patrolled the grounds, and ate lunch. But I couldn’t stop thinking about Mespirit again. I know it was her, I know her voice. I need to go and find out. I needed to go, now. I came up with a distraction that was sure to work.
“Where did the ball go?” asked Baby Eevee.
“I saw some Poochyena take it,” I said. “But don’t worry – I can go get it back.”
“Are you sure you can handle it?” asked Espy.
“I’m sure,” I smiled. “There was only two of them – I’ll have no problem.”
As I went off into the forest, I felt bad. I was betraying them. But I knew that I had to do this. A strong will inside me called me to go to Mesprit. I need to solve this mystery. I’m wandering deeper now – I hope I won’t-
“Gah!” I cried.
Something small and furry thumped me on the back of my head. As I turned around, my worst fear had come true.
“Did you get the ball yet?” asked Baby Eevee.
“What are you doing here alone!?” I asked back.
“W-Well, I thought you might get lost, so I came to help you look… where are we?”
“Are the other Eons following you?”
“No, I snuck away when they weren’t looking.”
“You what!? Now they’ll surely come looking for us!” I panicked.
“What’s wrong with you? All you did was come to look for the b-…”
I had no time. Knowing my clan, they would come in a heartbeat – hopefully Espy is sensible enough to stay and protect the grounds, or at least keep someone there to protect it. I quickly picked up Eevee by her neck and started running – running toward… Lake Rafia.

Chapter 7:

In just a half hour, Eevee and I reached the lake. It’s shimmering yet icy surface protected the cave – the cave where Mesprit lives. Something was different about the cave though – one of those things you couldn’t see, but you felt. An eerie aura omitted from the cave. I knew something was wrong. I knew I needed to come. Now, I just needed to figure out how to get across the lake… oh no, I’d forgotten that. I can’t swim. How am I supposed to get there?
“Yay ham sandwiches!” cried a familiar voice.
“Slow down Vaporeon, or else you’ll get a stomachache.”
“I don’t get stomachaches!”
I’d forgotten that too – apparently this lake was at the northern end of the forest, right where Vaporeon and Flareon were patrolling. It looks like I’m the only one who notices that something is wrong. But they won’t help. I’ll be in big trouble if they catch me. Hey, wait a minute! Vaporeon can swim! She can take me across the lake! Still holding the very confused Baby Eevee, I rush towards them.
“B-Baby Umbreon!” exclaimed Vaporeon, accidentally tossing the rest of her sandwich into the nearby water.
“You’re in big trouble, young lady!” snarled Flareon.
“Wait.” I said calmly. “Hear me out.”
And so, I told them about my dreams, about sneaking off here, about Eevee, and about the strange vibe I am feeling.
“… So that’s why,” I continued, “I need you to help take me and Eevee over there.”
“This is almost too crazy to believe,” pondered Flareon.
“Yeah.” added Vaporeon. “And my ham sandwich at the bottom of the lake doesn’t make it any better.”
“But you have to believe me!” I pleaded. A long silence then covered us.
“…Well,” Flareon said finally, “It seems as if you’re not lying.”
“Yeah. You never lie about serious stuff.” said Vaporeon. “I’ll take you and Eevee across.”
“Thank you!” I gleamed.
“I’ll stay here in case any little ones come.” suggested Flareon.
And with that, Vaporeon, who now told me to call her “Kiwi,” ferried me across. It was a short ride, but the whole time I kept wondering what I will find. A truly evil Mesprit? Or could something else be holding her captive? Could she be being forced to do what she has done? Nevertheless, I have to be brave. I have to be strong. And I have to protect little Eevee. The only reason I brought her along was because Mesprit mentioned her in my only dream. All this is happening so suddenly… But I have to stay strong. I will stay strong. No turning back anymore for me. I’m finding out what this is about right now!!!

Chapter 8:

Vaporeon, er, Kiwi, has reached the cave. We all got back on shore. This was it – the moment of truth. It may not be the end, but I will find out. I must. We approached the cave, and wandered inside.
My yellow markings began to glow, and some light was now present. It looked like any normal cave to me – rocks, water, and more rocks. But no sign of anyone. Knowing better than to fall into a trap, I took caution in proceeding. Eevee got scared and hopped on Kiwi’s back for comfort. Without paying attention to what was in front of me, I bumped into two big pillars. I figured those were common in caves. But no – these were silky – covered in fabric. The fear has all come back now – the one that I’ve had ever since I was small. The howling, the shot, the scream – it all rushed back in. I told myself – not now! But it kept coming. I felt something hit me, almost like a pinch, and I went down, knocked out. I dreamt of that nightmare – the nightmare I’ve tried to avoid. That time… the time my mother left.

~Flashback~

“Mama! Mama! Where are you mama?”
“Umbreon, sweetie, I love you so much…”
“Mama? Mama!”
“Please be strong – be strong for me. Your sister will do a good job caring for you.”
“Please don’t go mother. I’m not sure how the little one can make it. We’re all she has left.”
“I know, but there’s nothing that can save me….”
Her breathing grew more forced, knowing that her time was running short.
“ I…. love….
you.”
A bang was heard, then a large thump. Howls were heard in the distance – victory howls. My sister gathered me close, crying with me. I could make out the culprit – a human – his face was unmistakable – it was the same one that had captured me!

I awoke in a cold sweat. I was in some sort of wooden cage. Vaporeon and little Eevee were still knocked out. I heard the footsteps of the man approaching. It was brighter now, and I could see his dark brown shoes. He looked incredibly well dressed for a hunter, wearing those same silky pants, also wearing a suit. It looked like he was more fit as a groom. He walked in front of my cage. The lid opened, and he pulled me out. I could see his face now – very old and wrinkly, but still firm. Sharp gray hair stretched from both sides of his head. His suit was fancier than I expected – a unique pattern was embroidered onto it. I also noticed he held a cane.
“Well, look who we have here,” he said. “You look like that runt’s child.” He threw me back in the box. “I wonder if you mindless animals can even hear me…” he seemed to drift into his thoughts.
“Hey, buddy! I hear you loud and clear! I want answers, now!” I heard myself shout.
“!!! You can talk!” he exclaimed. “I thought I’ve heard you animals talk before, but, wow… I might have to sell you instead.”
“Who are you?” I asked.
“Why I am… von Karma. I do not need your name – it is worthless to me. You will be gone very soon,” he laughed. He swiftly walked down the hallway, and I watched him until he took a sharp left and vanished. Von Karma – I’ll beat you! You’re even lower than the houndooms! But, I realized I’ll need help. Maybe I can contact Espy… I’m not psychic, but I might be able to do it. Espy… Espy, can you hear me?
Read you loud and clear, she said. Glad to see you’re safe.
I quickly summarized the events, asked her to call up all the members to help, and come right away. With that taken care of, I just need to wait. I will get my revenge, von Karma!

Waitwaitwait, VON KARMA!?!?! Oh yes, I put von Karma in my story. Oh yes. Maybe now this story will start to get interesting….

[SonickLeafeon]

......How did I know this was going to happen. >.>

*facepaw*

[polarbear5665]

Epic chapters.
Can't wait for next one. :3

[KiwiBasket]

Ayayaya. SK, you've token your Phoenix Wright obessision too far! xD
...poor Sonick.
Dun worry, I won't put any Touhou on Vapy's Tale! :3

Meh, I think these chappies are a bit more random then the others.
Waitwut. Vapy is called Kiwi? Since when did Vapy go on the internet?

BTW, the lake Mespirt is in is I believe Lake Verity. =P

[SonickLeafeon]

Vaporeon seems kinda ditzy in this story. XD
Not so much with me. She's fun, but not ditzy. :P

[Baby Peach]

Von Karma? xD -shrugs-
Well now! The story's getting better and better everytime.

[SonicKirby64]

Yes, these chapters are more random. As for von Karma, I just KNEW I had to put him in. xD. But if you don't like him, cross out von Karma and put in some other name, like Bob! And I made Vaporeon "Kiwi" because when I was typing this story I kept typing "Kiwi" instead so I just incorperated it in. =3 And Vaporeon may be "ditzy", but I tried and apparently failed at comedy. =P

P.S. - I called it Lake Rafia while trying to come up with a fun name. Verity is overused. x3

[KiwiBasket]

You kept typing my name? xD
I'll take that as a compliment.

I'm fine with von Karma (Sonick probably isn't xD) but you know, he's not the most G thing around...
What's next, anyway? Edgeworth? lol

Rafia made me think of Rafaelia flowers (DA LARGEST FLOWERS IN DA WORLD).
waitwhat