a chief justice song!

[Video Gamer]

Nice song! I think it's good, Purpleroni!

[danniiel]

Song #2 is the winner by a mile!

[Mister_Jake_JeeperBubble]

so wuts the beat i dont under stand it

i have 1 hope u like it

[bggy1]

Originally Posted by captainjmb

here it is!
when chief justice was a judge! let my jorors go! when chief justice solved a crime! let my jorors go! when chief justice blew up! let my jorors go! when chief justice beat 8 toons! let my jorors go!
anyone like it?

what does jorors mean....and too short

[bggy1]

QUOTE=hex] that stinks after i read i could not sleep for week
OMG! that stinks :smiley25:

i mean i couldnt sleep for week after a week[/quote] what you originally said was very dumb, for someone getting opinions from people is no big deal, if you hate it and dont want to look at it, then why did you come to the thread and say something? I suggest if this happens again,KEEP YOUR COMMENTS TO YOURSELF

[Unspoken lies]

Ummm dude thtz ur song...................:x ...... ok then

[atmos]

i liked it

[Purpleroni]

Whose?
Mine on page 4 or captain's on post #1.

Also here's a note on captain's song. First his line then my notes.
when chief justice was a judge! (Note the lack of title, capatilization and good starting)
let my jurors go! (Further lack of capitilzation, I'll ignore it. However nobody owns the jurors so you cannot say MY jurors. Also the chorus is noly 1 line.)
when chief justice solved a crime! (The Chief Justice uses injustice and would not solve a crime)
let my juros go! (For the choruses afetr this see the first chorus's notes)
when chief justice blew up! (There is no proof that he blows up)
let mu jurors go!
when chief justice beat 8 toons! (If he does blow up then there is no evidence that EVRY chief jsutice has beaten 8 toons)
let my jurors go! (Note the lack of good ending as this is the end of the song)

So after this whose do you think is better?

[Lily Trickypop]

i sorta liked song 2 better............. but hey, dont give up

[Good Ol Skippy Sniffleflipper]

These topics are seriously pointless..

[OohLalala]

What the cookie ish wrong with you people. S/he just wrote a song and you people just rain on s/his parade. It was OK. I wouldn't be going off on s/him like a bomb saying "That was terrible. Go tocher someone elses life." You people have no heart. And don't be getting all smart aleck on me and saying "Then I would be dead." If I heard your guyz'z comments if I wrote that, and I was a little kid. I would be sad. Cruelness. Acketh. **Beep beeep**

Purpleroni, nice songs. They are neat.

[thesheriff]

lol good song purpleroni

[Good Ol Skippy Sniffleflipper]

I'm not trying to argue with you but for one thing, this is just a bunch of words put together. It doesn't have no beat, no music, no nothing. It would've been ok if it was a poem but apparently it isn't. I agree some people were cruel but this topic is really pointless. If people want to post a song. Then they should include some music or something. Its like listening to a song without the music, which is like I said, pointless.

[OohLalala]

Yeah, OK. But, they shouldn't have gone off like that. It can hurt kids feelings. But, this thread is very pointless. But, people, try to keep the hurtful comments to yourself.

[Good Ol Skippy Sniffleflipper]

^I agree with you on that one. They should've kept the comments less rude.