[SonicKirby64]

The Story of the eons baby Eons
(From Baby Umbreon’s point of view)

I wonder as to why I am writing this… probably out of boredom. I will try not to discontinue this story like last time, so I hope you like it. Note that this will not follow the Eons story at all. I don’t really read it too, but I might add in a few things from the original. Enjoy. =D


Prologue:

“Hi, I’m Baby Umbreon, one of the heads of the BEC, or Baby Eon Clan. Ours is almost like the normal Eons, except we don’t have as many responsibilities. Leafeon said that one day we’ll take over the Eon clan. Boy I can’t wait! Anyway, let me introduce you to my friends. Baby Eevee always loves to frolic in the fields, and is very carefree. Baby Vaporeon loves to swim, although sometimes he needs a little help through deeper waters. Baby Jolteon loves to pounce on everything she finds, seeing it as a marvelous treasure. Baby Flareon is very shy, and seems to run away when new people come to visit. Baby Espeon is the other leader of our group, but so far can only teleport a short distance. Baby Glaceon is very outgoing, being the first baby eon to get her full powers. Baby Leafeon loves spreading joy to the other residents of the forest, greening up their homes and bringing them berries. I, Baby Umbreon, am…. Um… well, I’m not sure. A lot of the eons complain that I’m one of the leaders, but Leaf won’t budge. I wonder if I am meant to be a leader…”

^More of an introduction of the characters, but it works. (Note that Baby Eevee will come in later)

Chapter 1:

The Baby Eons were enjoying a regular day, discovering new things and wandering to more places. Today they all stayed near the den, crowded around a peculiar object.

“What IS this?” asked Baby Vaporeon.
“I found it while walking on the northeast trail.” Baby Jolteon declared.
“It’s pretty…” said Baby Flareon.
“I want it!” shouted Baby Glaceon.
“No it’s mine!” Baby Leafeon shouted back.

A huge uproar was staring over that tiny little item. Baby Espeon and I were out for a walk, talking about upcoming events, so we were completely unaware. By the time we returned, all five were struggling to get their paws on the gleaming jewel.

“What’s going on!?!?” We triumphantly declared. Suddenly everyone paused and the globe fell to the ground.
“We leave for five minutes and we come back to this! Why I should keep you lot in these den grounds for good!” said Espy’s solid voice.
Espy always seems to know how to handle things… I thought. I can be just as great as her, but I’m just too nervous… I looked down at the ground, trying to focus on a small weedle.
“W-We’re so sorry!” The five said. Knowing that they had done wrong, they quickly hid in their dens, scared at what might come.
“This clan is always so fidgety!” Espy laughed. I tried to laugh along, but I heard nothing but a forced cackle.
Used to my strange behavior, Espeon went to check what caused the rukus.
“Well what to we have here...” the telepath said as she picked up the sphere. “It looks like… an Orb? I wonder what kind…”
“It’s a Decoy Orb.” I heard myself say.
“Really? Well, this could be useful in the future…” Espy dozed as she carefully placed the Orb in her bag.
Suddenly everything paused. A white light flashed in front of everyone’s eyes, yet nothing was there. Each Eon, including me, heard a distinct, familiar voice, but I couldn’t figure out what it was, who it was…. Wait… it was Espeon!

“Come to our den quickly… there’s trouble… hurry…”

The voice then faded out as quickly as it came. The seven of us gathered up, taking anything we might need, and started off toward the Eon Den.

But could they reach them?

Well I’m gonna end it here. Again, I know that some things will be out of order, and I don’t have a clue when they actually meet Mespirit and stuff, so bear with me. =P And yes, I’m trying to write it a bit from Baby Umbreon’s point of view, but I think I’m failing at it.

You can sign up, but I say this: I may or may not use your character. If I like the idea I may also tweak it a bit. Suggestions, used or not, are appreciated.

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So tell me how you like it or if you have any constructive criticism. =)

Also - I might be slow on writing the chapters, so please don't bug me about a new one. ><